On October 30, 2016, Love II Sk8 will be holding a 10% OFF store wide Halloween Sale/Charity Event on all goods with half of the proceeds going to the Gallagher family to make sure that their needs are met this winter. Love II Sk8 is also donating three boards and safety gear to these well deserving kids! Knotz Landing is covering the cost of the security deposit and first months rent.
Don't forget to check out the amazing sale Love II Sk8 will be having October 30, 2016! We appreciate your help and cannot wait to see the Gallagher's faces when they hear of the great people that came together to help make a warm and safe home for them a reality.
I'm glad we came up with this idea, it works and the way you word your post makes me want to go out and help them. It pulls you in and shows that the community really cares for their people. I would say on your last paragraph to Take your first sentence and make it your last. It just seem a tad bit repetitive because it is also the first sentence in your second paragraph. Other than that I think you did a great job!
ReplyDeleteFantastic work Jamie. You have great flow in your writing and are truly able to connect. I agree with Ricky's comment as well.
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